I found this article interesting and humorous. I really dont know what to think of the “finger” its a weird theory to look at. But i will be interested to find out what comes of it.
Vulcan said,
on March 11th, 2006 at 12:23 am
Satire – Time is there really enough?
Well I don’t about you but, I have a lot of trouble managing my time. You have school and work but where is the time for friends. What about family stuff how do you manage all that? Is it possible? Of course it is, just don’t sleep. I mean what’s the point of sleep anyway? It’s just time that your wasting away isn’t? If you didn’t sleep at all or just not as much then think of all the time you would have on your hands. I got another idea quit school! All that time sitting behind a desk listening to your teacher talk about stuff you won’t remember in ten minutes anyway it’s pointless. I say quit it what are really going to miss out on besides good jobs and the money that comes along with them. That isn’t a big deal now is it? One other thing is to quit work. I mean do we really need money for anything. We have parents, just bum it off of them, they won’t will they? I don’t see a problem with it anyway.
Athene said,
on March 11th, 2006 at 4:16 pm
Dear Vulcan,
Your essay is definately satirical. I like your use of questions to evoke thought. I’ve often had some of the same ideas myself. This is a topic that everyone can relate to. There are a few sentences that need question marks and a few others that need commas. Other than that, I enjoyed your satire. Good Job!
Athene
Vulcan said,
on March 14th, 2006 at 9:57 pm
My satire is more of a commentary than a satire. I am missing the sarcasm that is supposed to be in a satire
Vulcan said,
on March 15th, 2006 at 6:22 pm
Is there really enough time…
I am always seeing people doing the stupidest stuff, like confusing there words or going one way when in reality they should be going the other way. I saw someone the other day run into a brick wall thinking that it was an open field. I mean come on now you really can’t tell the difference. There are so many people out there just giving up sleep to do other things. I think we should just all follow in there foot steps forget about sleep and join in on the stupid stuff they do. It wouldn’t be stupid if were all falling mountains since we would be doing it together. So who’s with me lets go fall off of Mount Everest together. If its better to mange our time that way than I think its a great idea. I think it will all work out just fine.
Athene said,
on March 16th, 2006 at 8:06 pm
Your satire is a really good idea coupled with humor. You’re missing some punctuation corrections, but other than that it’s a humorous topic that we can all relate to.
on March 11th, 2006 at 12:00 am
http://www.satirewire.com/news/aug02/jupiter.shtml
I found this article interesting and humorous. I really dont know what to think of the “finger” its a weird theory to look at. But i will be interested to find out what comes of it.
on March 11th, 2006 at 12:23 am
Satire – Time is there really enough?
Well I don’t about you but, I have a lot of trouble managing my time. You have school and work but where is the time for friends. What about family stuff how do you manage all that? Is it possible? Of course it is, just don’t sleep. I mean what’s the point of sleep anyway? It’s just time that your wasting away isn’t? If you didn’t sleep at all or just not as much then think of all the time you would have on your hands. I got another idea quit school! All that time sitting behind a desk listening to your teacher talk about stuff you won’t remember in ten minutes anyway it’s pointless. I say quit it what are really going to miss out on besides good jobs and the money that comes along with them. That isn’t a big deal now is it? One other thing is to quit work. I mean do we really need money for anything. We have parents, just bum it off of them, they won’t will they? I don’t see a problem with it anyway.
on March 11th, 2006 at 4:16 pm
Dear Vulcan,
Your essay is definately satirical. I like your use of questions to evoke thought. I’ve often had some of the same ideas myself. This is a topic that everyone can relate to. There are a few sentences that need question marks and a few others that need commas. Other than that, I enjoyed your satire. Good Job!
Athene
on March 14th, 2006 at 9:57 pm
My satire is more of a commentary than a satire. I am missing the sarcasm that is supposed to be in a satire
on March 15th, 2006 at 6:22 pm
Is there really enough time…
I am always seeing people doing the stupidest stuff, like confusing there words or going one way when in reality they should be going the other way. I saw someone the other day run into a brick wall thinking that it was an open field. I mean come on now you really can’t tell the difference. There are so many people out there just giving up sleep to do other things. I think we should just all follow in there foot steps forget about sleep and join in on the stupid stuff they do. It wouldn’t be stupid if were all falling mountains since we would be doing it together. So who’s with me lets go fall off of Mount Everest together. If its better to mange our time that way than I think its a great idea. I think it will all work out just fine.
on March 16th, 2006 at 8:06 pm
Your satire is a really good idea coupled with humor. You’re missing some punctuation corrections, but other than that it’s a humorous topic that we can all relate to.