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Apollo said,
on March 10th, 2006 at 8:40 am
ANGERED BY SNUBBING, LIBYA, CHINA
SYRIA FORM AXIS OF JUST AS EVIL
To me this article seems a little dumb. I dont think that you can make an axis of just as evil because there are so many “Problem” nations out there just because bush doesnt include them doesnt mean they need to flaunt the fact they are evil.
Apollo said,
on March 11th, 2006 at 7:36 am
There is no real definition of time in the real world, you have a lot of people running around talking about not having enough time. Theres even an expretion people use There is not enough hours in the day. I feel so stressed out by that, this little insignificant word that has no meaning has a grip on my life. Take school work sports homework and friends, and your looking at little sleep with a lot to do. All someone in the world would have to do is figure out a magic pill that can let you not sleep but get all of the effect of sleeping. Well since that is not going to happen maybe it is time i sit down and think about how to free up some more time. Maybe i need to re evaluate what is important and whats not. Instead of blaming poor old father time, its time to point the finger at me.
Hypnos said,
on March 12th, 2006 at 8:09 pm
This is a very good article, seeing as how it is also what I used for my satire, and it shows that numerous people are thinking about this as a problem. I feel that your satire could be a little more in depth, and also it could have a little more explanation given to what the problems/solutions are. You do a very good job of bringing across the emotion though, as to what you are feeling when you think about not having enough time. Also, the expression you used is a very influencial part of this satire, and gives proof that this seems to be a big problem to numerous people.
Apollo said,
on March 13th, 2006 at 2:56 pm
no my satire was not in satire form because i did a commentary not a sarcastic form that was satireical
Apollo said,
on March 15th, 2006 at 11:35 pm
There is a fine line between waging war and intervening for the betterment of your country. The united stated has not waged war in many years and i think it is about time we did. Think about it we would solve all wars by being the world ruler. There would be no one to match us. We could americanize all the world and there would be no hunger.
Then if you want to get to the nitty gritty there would be no oil problem becuase we would rule everything in the world. I dont know that there is a downside to the US waging warfare on the world. After we won with some sacrifce there may be enough people left over for ten to live on each continent
To me this is the best idea we could use in the modern day, this is beacuse we would cure the population prblem and who knows after all the chemicals enter the air we may get some new species and a lot of other cool stuff. So president bush the answer is simple declare war on the world.
Hypnos said,
on March 18th, 2006 at 11:38 pm
I feel that this is still a commentary. It simply states what the writer sees as a problem and gives a way to go about it.
Apollo said,
on March 22nd, 2006 at 7:11 pm
The United States is the world ruler, the world from the Middle East to Asia to Australia the world is ours. Our unmatched military power is flexing its muscles and George Bush now has democracy everywhere. Our views have been forced down the throats of unwilling people, our religion and views have been beat into the diverse World that was once the World, which is now the United States of the World.
The fix is on the world is better now. We have succeeded in turning the world into robots for democracy which is exactly what we needed. The solution was right there under our noses. Why fiddle around with the wimps of the world who have sub par military? Why be the bully of smaller nations that we can muscle easily? We finally did what we had to do go out and dominate the world. I am glad that this has happened to the U.S. while I was alive, and we can all reap the benefits of being a World democracy.
on March 10th, 2006 at 8:40 am
ANGERED BY SNUBBING, LIBYA, CHINA
SYRIA FORM AXIS OF JUST AS EVIL
To me this article seems a little dumb. I dont think that you can make an axis of just as evil because there are so many “Problem” nations out there just because bush doesnt include them doesnt mean they need to flaunt the fact they are evil.
on March 11th, 2006 at 7:36 am
There is no real definition of time in the real world, you have a lot of people running around talking about not having enough time. Theres even an expretion people use There is not enough hours in the day. I feel so stressed out by that, this little insignificant word that has no meaning has a grip on my life. Take school work sports homework and friends, and your looking at little sleep with a lot to do. All someone in the world would have to do is figure out a magic pill that can let you not sleep but get all of the effect of sleeping. Well since that is not going to happen maybe it is time i sit down and think about how to free up some more time. Maybe i need to re evaluate what is important and whats not. Instead of blaming poor old father time, its time to point the finger at me.
on March 12th, 2006 at 8:09 pm
This is a very good article, seeing as how it is also what I used for my satire, and it shows that numerous people are thinking about this as a problem. I feel that your satire could be a little more in depth, and also it could have a little more explanation given to what the problems/solutions are. You do a very good job of bringing across the emotion though, as to what you are feeling when you think about not having enough time. Also, the expression you used is a very influencial part of this satire, and gives proof that this seems to be a big problem to numerous people.
on March 13th, 2006 at 2:56 pm
no my satire was not in satire form because i did a commentary not a sarcastic form that was satireical
on March 15th, 2006 at 11:35 pm
There is a fine line between waging war and intervening for the betterment of your country. The united stated has not waged war in many years and i think it is about time we did. Think about it we would solve all wars by being the world ruler. There would be no one to match us. We could americanize all the world and there would be no hunger.
Then if you want to get to the nitty gritty there would be no oil problem becuase we would rule everything in the world. I dont know that there is a downside to the US waging warfare on the world. After we won with some sacrifce there may be enough people left over for ten to live on each continent
To me this is the best idea we could use in the modern day, this is beacuse we would cure the population prblem and who knows after all the chemicals enter the air we may get some new species and a lot of other cool stuff. So president bush the answer is simple declare war on the world.
on March 18th, 2006 at 11:38 pm
I feel that this is still a commentary. It simply states what the writer sees as a problem and gives a way to go about it.
on March 22nd, 2006 at 7:11 pm
The United States is the world ruler, the world from the Middle East to Asia to Australia the world is ours. Our unmatched military power is flexing its muscles and George Bush now has democracy everywhere. Our views have been forced down the throats of unwilling people, our religion and views have been beat into the diverse World that was once the World, which is now the United States of the World.
The fix is on the world is better now. We have succeeded in turning the world into robots for democracy which is exactly what we needed. The solution was right there under our noses. Why fiddle around with the wimps of the world who have sub par military? Why be the bully of smaller nations that we can muscle easily? We finally did what we had to do go out and dominate the world. I am glad that this has happened to the U.S. while I was alive, and we can all reap the benefits of being a World democracy.